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Network access China 4 candidates TOEFL Writing Mistakes
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First, the use of complex words Many candidates, after months of bitter words back, self have achieved, the English level of the amount of active, writing words is not difficult to do so in order to Bo examiner attention, looking forward to "no it pours," the miraculous. For example, there is a Students who wrote "superfluous" term, this term I call "the word earthquake" because of epic proportions. In fact, the word does not seek ease, just appropriate. For example, "fire" can be described as simple, many students disdain A useful, but very common on the BBC news, it can be said Prime Minister Tony Blair's new proposal is "under fire", that is to be blamed, the meaning of being attacked. BBC News reporters are generally outstanding literature, vocabulary, unfathomable, so they use the "fire" the term does not mean that their vocabulary is not enough, but rather the "fire" in this case is not the language he chose . Another example is the "cut", all well-known foreign economic reports every day with the word on price or funds on the "cut", said that the reduction, many students use the "decrease", TOEFL common The "diminish", and even the GRE common "dwindle", are difficult to express "cut" crisp, relentless feeling. There are two words with complex vulnerabilities: First, extremely easy to spell wrong, it will provoke TOEFL examiners; Second, the use of appropriate enough: some words in the dictionary translation was not accurate, by using only humorous. Propaganda Department of the domestic schools have a lot of people translated into "propaganda department", Teacher puzzling, because "propaganda" is often used as derogatory, only propaganda during the war, only with "propaganda", is difficult to detract from the publicity, etc., as the university. Second, the use of complex sentence structure Many painstaking preparations for the second exam candidates a dozen sentences, attributive clause, adverbial clauses, noun clauses and so forth, and then do everything possible in the examination room, obliquely to the array type to set up patterns, waiting test The last official review. Since the burglary that the examiner reached a pinnacle that I sentence recitation, should give me a six. However, the essay exam is not a grammar test, but not memorize exam, but the study of examination language application . A good article should be drainage into waterways, natural, and not mechanically out of nothing. I am writing to remind students of exam time limit, there are two intentions: first, the examination is time-limited test, it goes without saying Yu; Second, to avoid students bother to go up with the "beautiful" sentence, often self-defeating, smooth and perception of the article. The reader to see this step will be to ask how the text can only be to the arbitrary use of export songjang level. Is simple, BBC reported on every day in the five sentences extracted repeatedly recite. Chinese saying goes, "familiar with the Tang Three hundred, a poem will yin. "English is also one of learning the truth. Back one month sentence, can one go on the exam, candidates and why not? Third, we should not copy Pham Van Many students ask me how to quickly improve their writing ability, I said one sentence: "There is a big copy paper." In fact, any English learning (broadly, any language learning) need to imitate, that is "copy . "In English so he took from the simple, direct copying the esoteric. Only continue to imitate," copy "before they can practice makes perfect, in the examination room to write flexible sentences, and copy writing on the book has little to do, will be allotted Points. This inference is absurd for three reasons: First, many so-called authority of the book is not the authority, which is not the eighth-eighth of Pham Van. I have won the domestic one "famous" book for foreign teachers to see. They have shook his head after watching that incomprehensible. This article can be deceived by the language Shangqie inexperienced students, but can not deceive the examiner. Even if he completely memorized the students, but also back an article just failed . Moreover, China has very few articles written by examiners willing to look at, let alone be enough to be treasured level. Second, even Pham Van enough on the level, students are not completely back down, back and properly or not is unknown. Some students memorize a word and then write a bunch of wrong sentences fusion own wrong sentence, scores ignore Began to wonder whether the examiner would like to imitate the model essays against candidates. Or, candidates rote, to see a similar topic to write up to reputation, without taking into account the changes brought about by changes in title (the book will be specifically explained), how An article on how irrelevant six points? Furthermore, reiterate that language is to imitate from, including the examiner's own imitation of the English knowledge is cumulative from. In fact, the description of a similar thing Therefore, if the description properly, the text is not surprising that there are similarities. Examiner will not look forward to you a thing has never been done before, or since the narrative; Instead, he will only accept foreigners to follow a common, often See description of methods. In other words, if you close the description of the general pattern of English, you will get high marks. Then simply put, the more you like a copy, the more likely to score high. Always remember one sentence: all the TOEFL exam Is to test out qualified students, rather than test out unqualified candidates. IV. "Every coin is two sides" Chinese people prefer to write informative, pick up and show that they are knowledgeable, well read. It is obvious disadvantages is that expose their short. Example, a hundred Chinese students with a bad mood "every coin is two sides ", this is not terrible, horrible thing is that immediately add that" including positive side and negative side ". Every coin has two sides, of course, but why did he have the negative side, one side Positive? Coins are money, money is always good, how can a side of good, bad side? I asked a foreign friend, this statement is there, but was intended to say 要一分为二 of view, two views is emphasized, rather than Advantages and disadvantages of things. A lesson from Chinese candidates should know that if there is no full grasp, do not assume indiscriminate use of foreign slang.
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